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Now you stand here...on a high rise building. It is a sunny saturday day. You look down and see people on the street and driving cars. You sigh. All started with a fight with your parents. They hate you since you were born. You have not many friends, but you have a crush on Gilbert, but what does that matter.

He doesn't feel the same way like you, you think so. You never had a boyfriend and you have always do things on your own. Your parents doesn't help you, they only want something from you. Actually you have to do everything, but you know, if you jump down from here, everything would be better. You look at your message. So no one cares about you and you start to cry.


Ludwig and his brother Gilbert watching TV. "Now are the breaking news. A girl is standing on a  high rise building and try to jump", the presenter says. Gilbert jumps from the couch and screams: "Thats [Name]" "Now calm down, Bruder", Ludwig answers. "I can't calm down, she is in the same class like me"

"Ok Bruder. Do you know where this building is?", Ludwig asks him and he looks closer to the TV and admits: "I think so...come on Luddy, lets go and safe her...I will save her because I am awesome" "Of course, Bruder", Ludwig answers and goes with him to the car.

Ludwig drives the car and Gilbert is the navigator. In 15 minutes they are there. A few people standing infront of the building, looking at you. "[Name]", Gilbert shouts. You couldn't hear him, but you smile, because you know, soon you can have your own fluffy cloud to rest.

Ludwig and Gilbert run into the house and try do reach the roof of the building so fast how they can. You take your phone and write a message to Gilbert: "I love you". You put your phone in your pocket. Again you look down from the building and your heart race.

Gilbert and Ludwig were on the last floor, when he notices your message. His heart stops for a few seconds. "I hope there is more time left", Gilbert whispers and run further with his younger brother.

A few seconds later you decide to jump down. You go to the edge to the building and let your body fall. Gilbert and Ludwig arrive on the roof and Gilbert see you jumping down. "[Name]!", he screams, runs and jumps too. He tries to fly faster and finally he hugs you while you two flying down.

"BROTHER", Ludwig shouts and runs to the edge. He looks down and whispers: "That can't be". "Gilbert", you whisper and hug him. Gilbert sighs. Will he die too? Only because you try to kill yourself? "We will save them", a man from the fire brigade shouts. You actually don't know what happend next, because you fainted.


You woke up in a bedroom with blue walls. You look around and notice flags of Prussia. You sigh and you are a little sad, because you didn't die, so the hell will go further. The only thing, what is good right now is, that you are in Prussia's bedroom, but thats all.

You start to cry and lay on your belly. After a while you notice a hand on your back. You stop to cry and sob and whisper: "Go away". You hug a pillow with the prussian flag on it. Gilbert looks at you and strokes your spine, you sob.

"Why did you want to kill yourself?", he wants to know and you reply: "It's none of your business, you german fool" "I'M PRUSSIAN", he says angrily. You admit: "I don't need your help, potato head". He stands up and keep his tone: "Ok, do what you time I will not save you". He goes out of the room and now you cry more.

One hour later you can't hold it back anymore and scream: "GILBERT". Probably the neighbours hear your scream too, but you didn't care. Immediately he runs to his room and opens the door quick.

"What's wrong, [Name]?", he asks you and you look at him with teary eyes. You whisper: "I missed you so much, I'm sorry". Then you sigh and Gilbert goes to you and sit down on the bed. He takes your body and hugs you close. You still hug the pillow and look at him. Gilbert strokes your spine again and whispers in your ear: "Tell me what happend".

You wait a few seconds and then you tell him about your parents and the disputes and what they want from you. It is actually to much to enumerate it here. After you told him the story, you press your body against him and cry and sob more. "I don't wanna life anymore", you say.

Gilbert sighs and hugs you tight. "You can stay here, with me and Ludwig", he offers you. You think about that and he places his chin on your head. You close your eyes and try to enjoy the feeling he gives to you right now. After a few minutes you reply: "Ok". Gilbert smirks and you ask: "And where should I sleep?"

He gives you a kiss on your cheek and answers: "In my bed of course. You messaged me that you love me and I love you too". Your heart stop for a while and you ask: "Really?". He strokes your hair and whispers in your ear: "Really".
I hope you like it. I really feel like this since hours, because my mother is against me now...again.
I hate it and now she will not speak with me, because I want to life my life different than hers,
but actually....all Gilbert fans will belong to Gilbert Beilschmidt :iconsexyprussia6plz:
i do not own the characters and hetalia
only the story came from my mind
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funnydragon1 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
Okay, best story ever. The second thing i wanted to say is that if youre parents are always really mean to you, then you can go to the government and get emancipated. You take a test to see if youre responsible enough to live on you own, and if you pass, the government helps you out a bit with getting started. Thats what ive heard from a lot of people, at least.
EmiliaSteilsson Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
awww so amazing
SuPa4Natural Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
:icony-u-noplz: Y u so awesome? :iconiloveyouplz:
Mizu1993 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
Am I? :D
SuPa4Natural Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
nian101 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
VanessatheOtaku Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I wish a guy treated me like this no they just ignore me and no one helps me when I try to commit suicide.....GREAT STORY THOUGH!!!!
graciepoo100 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
VanessatheOtaku Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
more then once
but ive gotten medical help
graciepoo100 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well that's good but let me know if you need some one to talk to I'm here for you
fnioami Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Artist
*looks up innocently* but what about my evil twin? she might try and kidnap you
Mizu1993 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
If this happen, I think Gilbert and Ludwig will help you :)
fnioami Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Artist
okay works for me *eats a cookie and runs off to find more stories*
Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
If he would go there to save me I'd do the same thing!
Nicky-Hetalia Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
Wanna cry~ but Wanna smile~
Minty-Ice Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist

I didn't realise I had tears down my eyes until the very end. TT 3 TT

Well done~ :heart:
sayuri-iera Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
;;A;; Oh my feels!! This is SO TOUCHING!! *cries in a random corner*
Bravo my friend! bravo!! :iconiloveitplz:
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